Category: Kent State

  • Multimodal Composition and Vernor Vinge’s Rainbows End

    Over the summer, I’m taking an intensive, four week class on teaching college writing.  The course is led by Dr. Brian Huot, Kent State University’s Writing Program Coordinator, and for three days this week, Dr. Pamela Takayoshi is introducing us to multimodal composition.

    Multimodal composition is the use of media other than paper and pencil for rhetorical communication and composition.  For example, blogs, Powerpoint presentations, Youtube videos, Podcasts, brochures etc. are other ways to make persuasive arguments and enter critical discourse.  In multimodal composition, the printed essay does not reign supreme.

    There seems to be a push in writing programs, which are increasingly influenced by the growth of rhetoric programs to the detriment of literature programs, to teach students to compose by any means available.  This means that students should be encouraged to create arguments, whether it be with audio essays or videos for example, with the tools at hand in order to increase their own involvement in the increasingly technologized mediums of communication.

    I like this idea, on the surface, because students should be aware of the ways they do and may be called upon to communicate in the twenty-first century.  Also, I engage in these practices in my own personal and professional lives with this blog, YouTube, and Flickr.  However, I first understood the basics of writing practices and composition before or in analog with my additionally technologized communication practices.

    My belief is that a grounding in traditional writing practices and composition empowers the individual to translate and apply those to other means and mediums of communication.  In the introductory writing classes, I feel that I not be meeting my students needs if I didn’t guide them towards an increased proficiency in writing before allowing them to use multimodal composition practices in the classroom.  Analogously, a pilot must earn a single engine pilots license prior to earning a license in larger and multiple engine aircraft.  Our students should safely pull out of a stall on a small Cesna before experiencing an F-15 flame out.  Therefore, I assert that students are better prepared communicators if they build on tried-and-true translatable communicative practices before using expressive, yet not as directly translatable, modes of communication.

    So what does this have to do with Vernor Vinge’s postsingularlity SF novel, Rainbows End (now available for free online here)?  In the novel, Robert Gu, a former great poet in the last throws of a slow Alzheimer’s death, is resurrected through regenerative medical technologies.  However, his disease has left a mark on his mind, and he has to relearn how to be a poet as well as learn about the changes in technologically mediated communicative practices.  Toward this end, he enrolls in a high school where he works with a teenage student, Juan Orozco, to create a multimodal final project in “shop class” that involves dance, music, holographic projection, and poetry.  There’s an exchange of ideas between the two characters–Gu introduces Juan to poetry and the power of the written word, and Orozco shows Gu the potential of story telling and art with the advances in technology during Gu’s illness.

    For all of the good things in Vinge’s novel, his writing about the multimodal compositions fell flat for me.  In fact, I cringed at the possibility that we’d move away from reading and writing within such a short time.  With the rapid advances in technology, and technology’s relationship and impact on the classroom, it seems like there is not enough reflection taking place on its long term and post-graduation effects on our students.  It’s one thing to write about how great this brave new world will be, but I question if that will be so.

    Granted, I haven’t been in the classroom yet, and I know that a large part of my own developing ideas on teaching practices are borrowed from the ways that I was taught, but m greatest rebellious response during the past couple of weeks in Brian’s class has been in regard to multimodal composition.  I don’t think it has a place in my introductory writing class, and I question to what extent I might employ it in higher level courses where students can demonstrate their ability to communicate effectively with the written word.

    A final issue that I have with multimodal composition is the technical instruction aspect of it.  I don’t do tech support.  In my previous life, prior to fully engaging my research interests in graduate school, I built more computers than I can count, I’ve repaired more Macs than I can imagine, and I gave phone, teletype, and email assistance to innumerable customers at the late, great Mindspring in Atlanta, Georgia.  I didn’t sign on to pursue research and college teaching to help students learn how to use iMovie, much less the poorly designed Microsoft Movie Maker.  I love technology, and it’s an integral part of my life, including  two World of Warcraft accounts, a 30″ Apple Cinema Display and Mac Book Pro, iPhone, building a Media Center PC, blogging, and keeping my girlfriend’s ailing Sony Vaio alive while she studies for her comps, but I strongly insist on keeping that separate from my goal of enriching the lives of my students by challenging them to think deeply, imagine new possibilities, and effectively communicate through writing before moving up to multimodal composition practices.

  • The Image of Women in Philip K. Dick’s Ubik

    Yesterday, I presented my paper, “The Image of Women in Philip K. Dick’s Ubik” in my methods of theory course at Kent State University.  My presentation was well received, and I got some terrific questions and comments.  I’m glad that Professor Mack Hassler attended my presentation, because he asked me and the other presenters some thought-provoking questions.  I’m glad the presentation is completed, so that I can write my final publishable paper version.  As far as my presentation paper is concerned, I’ll probably take it on the road to SFRA or IAFA next year.

    Besides expanding that paper to about fifteen pages, I have to write a 22 page paper for postcolonialism and a 20 page paper for semeiotics.  Oh, and I have a semeiotics final take home exam that will consume about 10-12 pages.  And to top it all off, time is quickly running out for this semester!

  • The Image of Women in Philip K. Dick’s Ubik

    I’m very close to completing the first draft of my Methods course paper rewrite on Philip K. Dick’s 1969 novel, Ubik. Instead of talking about the metaphysical implications exposed by Dick’s idea of half-life, I switched tracks and I’m now writing about the image of women in the novel. I’m beginning with Joanna Russ’ 1974 essay from Vertex titled, “The Image of Women in Science Fiction.” It’s a very on-target piece of Second Wave Feminism theorization about the representation of women in SF. Russ’ take on it at that time is that there are no women in SF, just images of women. For my presentation, I’m specifically writing about Ella Hyde Runciter, and the different ways she’s presented in the second and sixteenth chapters (the one after first, and the one before last). I’m closing with a discussion about Dick’s mathematical error in chapter four in counting the female inertials in Runciter’s office. I have high hopes for the paper, which I’ll be presenting in class on Thursday. One thing I don’t like about he presentation is that we have to do it standing up. I’ve been to six conferences, and never once have I had to stand. If I’m going to talk for twenty minutes, I’d like to be comfortable.